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Jayflight

Tuesday, April 27, 2010

Warriors: Omen of the Stars: Night Whispers (my version) Chapter 11

Chapter 11 (Dovepaw's point of view)

As soon as Dovepaw left the tunnel, following Jayfeather, she questioned him unrelentlessly. "Did you know about the tunnels before now? Why did you never tell me about them?" One more question fizzed on her tongue, but she was worried to ask it. "Who is Dove's Wing?"
Jayfeather turned to face her, his blind eyes glowing in the cold leaf-bare moonlight. "We've got to talk. Where is Lionblaze? Is he out?"
Dovepaw cast out her senses, first to the ThunderClan camp. In the warriors' den, a familiar golden pelt lay, asleep, snoring loudly. "He's sleeping," she said.
Jayfeather shrugged. "We can tell him later. But I've got to talk to you." He sat down under a bare holly bush, dead red holly berries crushing under his paws. Dovepaw sat down as well, facing the medicine cat.
"There was a time before the Clans came to be." Jayfeather said. Dovepaw felt as though she had been drenched in freezing water. "Even before StarClan."
"What!" Dovepaw cried, jumping to her paws. "I don't believe you!" But a little bit of her did believe what Jayfeather was saying. Nothing could have been for ever.
Jayfeather spoke sadly. "Even a StarClan cat eventually fades away forever, into nothingness." Dovepaw felt defeated. "Who am I? Who are you?" she asked softly, knowing the answer would be life-changing.
This time, Jayfeather sounded ancient. "Jay's Wing and Dove's Wing."
A sudden realization swept over Dovepaw. "We are from before StarClan." she said. "We are the ancients. But, then, who is Lionblaze?"
Jayfeather shrugged. "I don't know. I've tried many times to figure him out, but I just don't know."
Dovepaw laughed. "You don't suppose his name could be Noisy Snorer, do you?"
"We've got to be serious about this." Jayfeather chided the gray apprentice. "We've got to find out what the prophecy means, before it's too late. I think we're here to save the Clans from the Dark Forest, but when? I don't think any cat knows, not even StarClan."
Dovepaw suddenly sounded distant. "The Great Battle is coming, and no cat but us can stop it."

A sleepy Dovepaw strode out of the apprentices' den and into the pale leaf-bare morning. "New-leaf is soon," she yawned. "I can smell the plants readying to burst out." Even the cold morning felt a little warmer. The cool breeze that blew through the camp even had scents of warmth on it.
"Good morning, Dovepaw." Firestar padded by on his way to the fresh-kill pile. "Can I speak with you?"
Dovepaw dipped her head to him. "Of course. Do you want me to get Lionblaze or Jay's -" She had almost said Jay's Wing. "Or Jayfeather?"
"No. Just you." The ThunderClan leader replied.
"Come on, Dovepaw! Show us a battle move!" Cherrykit squeaked. She leaped clumsily onto Dovepaw's twitching tail tip. Dovepaw whirled around and playfully, carefully, knocked Cherrykit off her tail.
"Watch this, Dovepaw!" Molekit mewed. He crouched to the ground and stalked a small stone, his tail whisking from side-to-side.
"Keep your tail down!" Dovepaw said. The whisking stopped. Molekit tracked the stone across the clearing, until he was close enough to strike.
"Got ya!" Molekit pounced on the little rock. Dovepaw praised him with a "Very good," and padded toward Firestar's den.
The camp was beginning to stir. Mousefur, thin and weak, was laying on the halfrock with Purdy. Jayfeather came out of his den with a mouthful of leaves and trotted over to them. Mousefur is sick. Dovepaw thought. She could hear Mousefur's tired breathing and smell the sickness. Cherrykit and Molekit were playing in a small square of sunlight, jumping on each other's shadows. Sandstorm was leading a hunting patrol with Dustpelt, Thornclaw, Ivypaw, Cinderheart, and Leafpool. Dovepaw stopped. Something was wrong. She looked around. The camp was secure, the kits were playing, and the hunting patrol had left. But something was wrong. Casting out her senses, Dovepaw didn't see anything out of the ordinary, until she saw a giant ShadowClan patrol racing toward their camp at a tremendous speed.
"ShadowClan attack!" Dovepaw screeched. The whole Clan jumped to attention.
Daisy and Ferncloud gathered the kits into the nursery, and Jayfeather hurried Mousefur and Purdy into the elders' den. He raced back to his den, carrying the remainder of the shriveled leaves. Firestar bounded up the rockfall and yowled to the warriors and apprentices from Highledge,
"Birchfall, Spiderleg, Brambleclaw, Lionblaze, Dovepaw, Squirrelflight, Graystripe, and I will go and find out what ShadowClan wants. Half of the rest of you, come with us, but stay hidden in the brush. The other half will stay and guard the camp."
Dovepaw pounded out the thorn tunnel, with the other appointed cats right behind her. In the forest, Firestar took the lead, and ThunderClan raced through the forest. Feeling worried, Dovepaw wondered, Does StarClan want this battle to happen?

4 comments:

  1. Are you there, Flametail?

    Jayflight

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  2. Yah i was waiting for you to post! Sorry.

    Lionblaze was waken by Dovepaw's screech "Shadowclan attack!"
    Lionblaaze hurried out as fast as he could! He was not in the mood to fight, he had been woken from a great dream and the ShadowClan cats would pay for his distress! He found out that he was wanted with Firestar to see what ShadowClan wanted, so he rushed over to where he was.
    "Good you are here, now lets go!" Firestar said strenly and fast. Before waiting for a response from any of the cats Firestar raced off in the direction of where Dovepaw said shadowClan was.
    /Accordining to Dovepaw the partol was huge! We only have 8 and some of us, asd the rest that are hidding in the bushes!/ Lionblaze thought to himself! /I hope we are enough to beat them!/ he prayed.
    /I wish Cinderheart got to go with us, in our group instead of staying in the bushes!/ He thought as he was runnnig.
    They met the ShadowClan cats and there was no doutb that they were shocked that ThunderClan knew about their invasion. Blackstar stepped forward and hissed, "How in StarClan's name did you /ThunderClan/ filth know about our invasion?"
    When everyone stayed quiet Blackstar howled in anger and flung himself against Firestar, pinning him down and ripping at his throat. All three cats jumped on Blackstar hauling him off Firestar and flinging him against a tree. The other ShadowClan cats were fighting The rest of the cats and the cats that appeared out of the bushes.
    /Well atleast we are even!/ Lionblaze thought to himeself.
    He found Cinderheart pinned down fighting a cat half a size bigger than her. Lionblaze felt his fur stand up with rage and he clawed at the cat unmercifully. When the cat got the message and got off running into the forest, back to his camp Lionblaze turned to Cinderheart and asked, "Are you okay?????"
    "Im...well I'll live. But you gave that cat some scars that could be vital!" She scolded, not harshly.
    "Come on let's find Dovepaw!" He said.
    They found Dovepaw fighting an apprentice, they were circaling eachother and then the ShadowClan cat jumped at her without warning, but she managed to dodge and he landed on his face. Cinderheart turned around to see a cat in air comming at her. She swated the tom's eyes and Lionblaze kicked him in his stomach sending him flying. One of the she cats, apperently his mate was full of anger and came at Lionblaze with full force, knocking the wind out of him. he tried to defend him self but he felt a paw hit his head hard and heard Cinderheart call out, "Lionblaze!"
    And then everything went black.
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    Lionblaze woke up two miniutes later and when he first opened his eyes he saw Cinderheart's worried face and Dovepaw's hovering over him.
    "How long was I out?" Lionblaze croacked.
    "Not very long!" Cinderheart said relief was full in her voice.
    "Are you okay?" Dovepaw asked.
    "Yea im okay, my head just hurts." Lionblaze said.
    "She scratched at you a lot, and yet you still manage to not have a scratch on you. How do you do it?" Cinderheart shook her head amazed.
    "Where is the cat?" Lionblaze asked.
    "She ran off in the forest with her mate. Cinderheart and Ivypaw faught her off for you!" Dovepaw said happily, then added, "And I drove off that ratty apprentice!"
    "Very good!" Lionblaze praised.
    Lionblaze got up, with pain shooting through him. He saw that cats around him were still fighting. He saw Graystripe fall, wounded badly, with Birchfall by his side. He saw them make their way back to camp. He was sick of it.
    "ENOUGH!!!!!" He bellowed.
    All cats stopped fighting and turned to him.
    "This has gone on long enough! Stop! Blackstar! Why have you come?! Why attack?!" Lionblaze yowled the questions at Blackstar.

    Okay, can you pick up from there?

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  3. Finally! The Internet is working again! I'll post right away!!!

    Jayflight

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