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Jayflight

Thursday, May 6, 2010

Warriors: Omen of the Stars: Night Whispers (my version) Chapter 12

Chapter 12 (Lionblaze's point of view by Flametail)



Lionblaze was waken by Dovepaw's screech "ShadowClan attack!"
Lionblaze hurried out as fast as he could. He was not in the mood to fight; he had been woken from a great dream and the ShadowClan cats would pay for his distress! He found out from Brightheart that he was wanted with Firestar to see what ShadowClan wanted, so he rushed over to where he was.
"Good, you are here, now let's go!" Firestar said fast. Before waiting for a response from any of the cats Firestar raced off in the direction of where Dovepaw said ShadowClan was.
According to Dovepaw the patrol was huge! We only have eight and the rest that are hiding in the bushes! Lionblaze thought to himself. Great StarClan! I hope we are enough to beat them! he prayed.
I wish Cinderheart got to go with us, in our group instead of staying in the bushes! He thought as he was runnnig.
They met the ShadowClan cats and there was no doubt that they were shocked that ThunderClan knew about their invasion. Blackstar stepped forward and hissed, "How in StarClan's name did you ThunderClan filth know about our invasion?"
When everyone stayed quiet Blackstar howled in anger and flung himself against Firestar, pinning him down and ripping at his throat. All three cats jumped on Blackstar hauling him off Firestar and flinging him against a tree. The other ShadowClan cats were fighting the rest of Firestar's patrol and the cats that appeared out of the bushes.
Well at least we are even! Lionblaze thought to himself.
He found Cinderheart pinned down fighting a cat half a size bigger than her. Lionblaze felt his fur stand up with rage and he clawed at the cat unmercifully. When the ShadowClan cat got the message and got off running into the forest, back to his camp Lionblaze turned to Cinderheart and asked, "Are you okay??"
"I'm...well I'll live. But you gave that cat some scars that could be vital!" She scolded, not harshly.
"Come on, let's find Dovepaw!" He said.
They found Dovepaw fighting an apprentice; they were circling each other and then the ShadowClan cat jumped at her without warning, but she managed to dodge and he landed on his face. Cinderheart turned around to see a cat in air coming at her. She swatted the tom's eyes and Lionblaze kicked him in his stomach sending him flying. One of the she cats, apparently his mate was full of anger and came at Lionblaze with full force, knocking the wind out of him. He tried to defend himself but he felt a paw hit his head hard and heard Cinderheart call out, "Lionblaze!"
And then everything went black.

Lionblaze woke up two minutes later and when he first opened his eyes he saw Cinderheart's worried face and Dovepaw's hovering over him.
"How long was I out?" Lionblaze croaked.
"Not very long!" Cinderheart said, relief was full in her voice.
"Are you okay?" Dovepaw asked.
"Yea, I'm okay, my head just hurts." Lionblaze said.
"She scratched at you a lot, and yet you still manage to not have a scratch on you. How do you do it?" Cinderheart shook her head, amazed.
"Where is the cat?" Lionblaze asked.
"She ran off in the forest with her mate. Cinderheart and Ivypaw fought her off for you!" Dovepaw said happily, then added, "And I drove off that ratty apprentice!"
"Very good!" Lionblaze praised.
Lionblaze rose to his paws, with pain shooting through him. He saw that cats around him were still fighting. He saw Graystripe fall, wounded badly, with Birchfall by his side. He saw them make their way back to camp. He was sick of it.
"Enough!!" He bellowed.
All cats stopped fighting and turned to him.
"This has gone on long enough! Stop! Blackstar! Why have you come?! Why attack?!" Lionblaze yowled the questions at Blackstar. He felt pain rack his body, but he wasn't going to stop. "Why are we fighting over a useless piece of land?!"

2 comments:

  1. Great, Flametail! I'll write Jayfeather's POV next. What's going to happen: The battle will be caused by Tigerheart (like the other battle at the end of Fading Echoes caused by Ivypaw).

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