Chapter 16 (Jayfeather's point of view)
Jayfeather sat quietly in his den, munching on a tasty mouse. He chewed slowly, his head in the past, wondering if he would ever find Rock's stick again. He missed being able to go to it when he needed to think. Suddenly, the den was alive with terror.
"Jayfeather!" Millie called franticly. "Jayfeather!" Jayfeather leaped to his paws, the mouse forgotten. Billows of terror from Millie came crashing over the blind medicine cat, almost knocking him on his belly.
"What is it, Millie?" Jayfeather fought to stay calm. He probed at her thoughts. Briarlight.
Millie took a deep breath of air. "Briarlight is coughing terribly!" she wheezed.
Jayfeather pounded out of the den and into the chilly sunhigh air. He made his way straight to the warriors' den, where a wave of coughing greeted him. Briarlight was coughing. "Move her right to the nursery - it's warmer. I don't want the cough to turn into whitecough or greencough. Is there a hunting patrol out?" he asked.
Millie's fright turned into rage. "This is no time to worry about fresh-kill!" she snapped. "What about my kit?"
Jayfeather fought to keep Millie calm. "I need it to keep Briarlight warm," he responded carefully. "Now, please, take her to the nursery." Millie's anger subsided and Jayfeather heard her help Briarlight to the nursery. He followed them there, and Briarlight collapsed in an empty nest. "Millie, lie next to Briarlight to warm her. Briarlight, can you try yowling? It will help clear your chest and hopefully stop the coughing, but I don't know if that's what it is - it might be whitecough. Ferncloud, go out and wait for the hunting patrol to return. When they do, take all their fresh-kill and bring it straight here. And don't let any cat stop you."
Ferncloud hurried out of the den.
For several minutes Briarlight howled, and Jayfeather kept his ears pricked toward the clearing. He heard Graystripe's voice as the hunting patrol returned.
"Just tell us what you need it for, Ferncloud, and we'll be glad to give it to you." Graystripe was saying. Jayfeather raced out of the den and grabbed Blossomfall's still warm pheasant.
"Give me that!" he growled at Blossomfall, his teeth gripped firmly in the feathery bird. "It's for your sister!" Blossomfall dropped the pheasant, and Jayfeather took it back to the nursery and put it beside Briarlight. Blossomfall and Bumblestripe came in promptly.
"Bring me all the rest of the warm fresh-kill," Jayfeather said quickly. The two cats bounded away. "And nothing cold!" he yowled after them. A few minutes later they returned, mouths filled with prey, and Jayfeather arranged it neatly around Briarlight. "You can stop yowling now, Briarlight," Jayfeather said. "Just rest in here for a while, and I'll be back later to check on you." He touched his tail-tip to Millie's shoulder and let her out of the nursery.
"Jayfeather-" she began, but the medicine cat silenced her.
"I don't know what it is," he said. "Her chest coughing didn't sound like this, but she doesn't smell like whitecough. I need you to stay up with her tonight. Blossomfall and Bumblestripe, too, if they want to. Just don't lick her. If you do, when her fur dries it will only cool her, and that is a sure invitation for greencough, especially in leaf-bare. If anything happens or goes wrong, come get me right away." He left Millie in front of the nursery and headed back to his den to sort juniper berries.
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Very good! But POOOR Briarlight!
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Yeah, I should post on Amazon, but I'm kept pretty busy with school and homework (but almost done... HOORAY!!!) and writing my own books so it tends to get a little busy.
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That's COOL! Okay!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Flametail! :) I'm glad you liked it!
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PS. Could you write a Lionblaze chapter, please?
Lionblaze heard all of the commotion but didn't go near Millie. When he saw Jayfeather exiting the nursery he ran up to him and asked, when he got to Jayfeather, "What was that all about?"
ReplyDelete"Briarlight has a pretty bad cough.I think it may be Whitecough, but she doesn't smell liike Whitecough." Jayfeather explained.
"Oh. I see." Lionblaze replied.
"Yes, well I have to go sort juniper berries." Jayfeather sighed.
Lionblaze left Jayfeather to sort his juniper berries. Right when he was about to sit down and eat a mouse that he had gotten from the fresh kill pile, which was a bit cold, Dovepaw came racing in like a maniac and crashed into him.
"Dovepaw!-" Lionblaze started.
"Shh! Just follow me!" Dovepaw hissed, then without waiting turned and ran into the forest.
Lionblaze sat there for a second, then ran off to follow Dovepaw. It didn't take long for him to catch up with her, but when he did he was a bit out of breath.
"Dovepaw, what is this all about?" Lionblaze puffed.
"Shh! I dont know!" Dovepaw growled.
"YOU DONT KNOW?!" Lionblaze almost yowled!
"Lionblaze!!! I told you to shut it!" Dovepaw snapped.
"And since when were /you/ the boss of /me/?" Lionblaze snapped back.
"Just shut it, okay?" Dovepaw ordered.
"What ever this is, it had better be good, or you just earned yourself a full day, no breaks of battle training, then hunting." Lionblaze growled.
"Shut UP!" Dovepaw said in an annoyed tone. /Why are we heading towards the ShadowClan border? I told /her/ to spy, not WITH me though./ Lionblaze thought to himself.
"Why-" Lionblaze started again.
"SHHH!" Dovepaw hissed.
Lionblaze stayed quiet, and they ran through the forest sliently, careful not to make a sound. When the could smell a strong whiff of ShadowClan they slowed down into a fast walk.
What-"
Dovepaw gave Lionblaze a look that said /shut up, you are really annoying me now./
Lionblaze rolled his eyes but went along with it.
They went closer to the border and heard a cat say,"Okay Tigerstar. I did what you told me to. I told Blackstar to have war on ThunderClan. But you said I'd feel victorious. You said that it would be great. But I dont feel so good. ThunderClan warriors are hurt and so are ShadowClan. Nothing gained nothing lossed."
Lionblaze saw Dovepaw's ears perk up when she heard the voice talk. Lionblaze,too, knew exactly who was talking was. Tigerheart.